Friday, June 22, 2007

16 words

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No talent. No creativity. Take my job away, I feel i am nothing. Nothing to myself.

A talks about B. B bad mouthes A. C listens to both A and B. Bitches!

Woke up. S-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d. Found him gazing at me. Smiled. You are beautiful, he said. *In love*.

My lame attempt on the 16 words story. It's a competition. Try it. email entries : SSS@apostrophegallery.com
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13 comments:

  1. Jo KontanFriday, June 22, 2007 7:40:00 pm

    Lolletah :

    U know what. I've tried it earlier. Tapikan, bila baca balik kita seniri pun tak paham. Plus, it exceeds 16 words. Hampeh. Lepas tuu terus tinggal

    Clap-clap. I like ur "woke-up..

    Nice.

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  2. AnonymousSaturday, June 23, 2007 3:51:00 am

    Interesting...
    I may just try this:)

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  3. LolliesSaturday, June 23, 2007 7:32:00 am

    jokontan - ha ha ha try je lagi. lepas ni sure ok.

    hazia - go ahead. err how to comment in your blog eh?

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  4. anneSaturday, June 23, 2007 8:12:00 am

    pintu rumah sape pulak ni.....

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  5. simahSaturday, June 23, 2007 11:49:00 am

    interesting ni...16 word eh?

    congrats to haziq for his wonderful performance... seronok hati bila anak perform well kan?

    take care... :0)

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  6. maklangSaturday, June 23, 2007 3:50:00 pm

    aha...congrats to haziq...

    cannot comment panjang2..nanti terlebih 16 words!

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  7. UnknownSaturday, June 23, 2007 8:25:00 pm

    :) lollies...

    "Aku pandang dia. Dia jeling aku.
    Aku pandang TV screen. Dia larikan lauk aku! Kucing....."

    "Aku pandang dia. Dia jeling aku. Aku senyum. Dia senyum. Aku dan dia....sehingga bila-bila. Cinta!"

    "Aku pandang dia. Dia jeling aku.
    Aku tak kenal dia. Penjual maruku.
    Aku beli juga.Kesian!"


    heheheh

    sorry...i got carried away!

    idham

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  8. LolliesSunday, June 24, 2007 8:21:00 am

    anne - that is a picture of the gate quite common in this region except that it is not used much in qatar anymore except on old houses. I still find them plenty in Oman remote areas. this one is taken in OMan.

    to answer your question, I don't know whose door that is

    simah - heh heh seronoklah jugak

    mak lang - eh komen tak termaktub dalam rule 16 words ini

    idham - ha ha ha. count on you to come up with creative lines

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  9. NJ@GoboklamaSunday, June 24, 2007 1:04:00 pm

    owwwwh...kisah cinta jaman dulu ek? bestkn kalau ada cinta? boleh saja menangani apa2 jua masalah di dunia ini,heh. :)

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  10. LolliesSunday, June 24, 2007 1:18:00 pm

    qisst - errr bukan kesah lama. kesah baru. baru aje berlaku beberapa hari yang lalu. di pagi yang hening. air liur basi pun ada lagi. auwww

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  11. KakNiSunday, June 24, 2007 1:33:00 pm

    Best nyer pagi-pagi lagi hubby dah start feeling feeling...

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  12. ruby ahmadSunday, June 24, 2007 3:45:00 pm

    Hi Lollies,

    It is not as easy as it looks. But good tries. Suspense I mula2 kat your cerita. So ada talent with short stories..he he.

    Second story tu lumrah all over..ha ha.

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  13. LolliesMonday, June 25, 2007 9:51:00 am

    ah ni - and ajuga boleh mencubanya. dia tak geti. anda start dulu

    ruby - now i am becoming so aware with it. now that ia mixing with more women than when i was working. i don't like it one bit

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