Friday, June 22, 2007

16 words

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No talent. No creativity. Take my job away, I feel i am nothing. Nothing to myself.

A talks about B. B bad mouthes A. C listens to both A and B. Bitches!

Woke up. S-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d. Found him gazing at me. Smiled. You are beautiful, he said. *In love*.

My lame attempt on the 16 words story. It's a competition. Try it. email entries : SSS@apostrophegallery.com

13 comments:

JoKontan said...

Lolletah :

U know what. I've tried it earlier. Tapikan, bila baca balik kita seniri pun tak paham. Plus, it exceeds 16 words. Hampeh. Lepas tuu terus tinggal

Clap-clap. I like ur "woke-up..

Nice.

Hazia said...

Interesting...
I may just try this:)

Lollies said...

jokontan - ha ha ha try je lagi. lepas ni sure ok.

hazia - go ahead. err how to comment in your blog eh?

anne said...

pintu rumah sape pulak ni.....

simah said...

interesting ni...16 word eh?

congrats to haziq for his wonderful performance... seronok hati bila anak perform well kan?

take care... :0)

maklang said...

aha...congrats to haziq...

cannot comment panjang2..nanti terlebih 16 words!

idham said...

:) lollies...

"Aku pandang dia. Dia jeling aku.
Aku pandang TV screen. Dia larikan lauk aku! Kucing....."

"Aku pandang dia. Dia jeling aku. Aku senyum. Dia senyum. Aku dan dia....sehingga bila-bila. Cinta!"

"Aku pandang dia. Dia jeling aku.
Aku tak kenal dia. Penjual maruku.
Aku beli juga.Kesian!"


heheheh

sorry...i got carried away!

idham

Lollies said...

anne - that is a picture of the gate quite common in this region except that it is not used much in qatar anymore except on old houses. I still find them plenty in Oman remote areas. this one is taken in OMan.

to answer your question, I don't know whose door that is

simah - heh heh seronoklah jugak

mak lang - eh komen tak termaktub dalam rule 16 words ini

idham - ha ha ha. count on you to come up with creative lines

goboklama said...

owwwwh...kisah cinta jaman dulu ek? bestkn kalau ada cinta? boleh saja menangani apa2 jua masalah di dunia ini,heh. :)

Lollies said...

qisst - errr bukan kesah lama. kesah baru. baru aje berlaku beberapa hari yang lalu. di pagi yang hening. air liur basi pun ada lagi. auwww

~ahni~ said...

Best nyer pagi-pagi lagi hubby dah start feeling feeling...

ruby ahmad said...

Hi Lollies,

It is not as easy as it looks. But good tries. Suspense I mula2 kat your cerita. So ada talent with short stories..he he.

Second story tu lumrah all over..ha ha.

Lollies said...

ah ni - and ajuga boleh mencubanya. dia tak geti. anda start dulu

ruby - now i am becoming so aware with it. now that ia mixing with more women than when i was working. i don't like it one bit